My First Draft Of The Script

Characters:

Riven (girl main character)-Actor:Mia Jones

Clancy (friend of Riven's)-Actor:Jenny Crook

Jude (friend of Riven's)- Actor: Kirsty McDonald

Ilah (friend of Riven's)- Actor:Mia Harrison

Gray- (main male character)- Actor: Jacob Axford

Hugh-(male main characters best friend)- Actor: Jack Gough
Voice over voice: Jacob Axford

The brief script of the trailer:

• Music is playing throughout most of the trailer

• The appropriate audiences slide

• Starts off with six Different shots fading into each other of Riven doing funny things:

• Voice over says: 'Meet Riven' whilst Riven is looking in the mirror the camera pans to her jumping up and down to pull her jeans on then goes off to the side and a crash sound is made to give the effect that she has fallen (wide shot)

• Riven sitting in bed watching tv and laughing and snorting (wide shot)

• Riven Spilling a drink over (mid shot)

• Riven puts her retainers in (medium close up)

• Riven falling over a football (cutaway shot)

• Over the shoulder shot of Riven looking in the mirror smudging mascara in the middle of her nose and groaning (close up)

• Voice over: 'And Gray Johnson'

• Six different shots of Gray are shown (fade into each other like on Riven's)

• Gray walking down the street (wide shot)

• Gray talking to Hugh (two shot)

• Gray having a football kicked at his head (wide shot)

• Gray putting two chips in his mouth like a walrus laughing (medium close up)

• Gray pulling a stupid face for a picture (mid shot)

• Gray tripping over (wide shot)

• Voiceover: 'All they needed was to fall for each other'

• Shot of Riven starry eyed (mid shot)

• Cuts to Gray walking down the street (wide shot)

• Clancy says, 'You've liked Gray since you came out the womb Riv, why don't you just talk to him?' (over the shoulder shot)

• Riven says, 'He doesn't even know I exist' (mid shot)

• Jude says, 'As in Mr Gray from the books? So he's into like whips and chains and stuff?' (mid shot)

• Shot of all the girls laughing (wide shot)

• Hugh say's: 'Just talk to her' (mid shot)

• Gray say's: 'I just need the right moment' (over the shoulder shot)

• Shot of the girls in the bedroom (wide shot)

• Clancy: Were going to have to do something about the way you look we will have to start with the brows you look like chewbacca. (mis shot)

• Then goes into a extreme close up of Riven's badly drawn on eyebrows.

• Riven: 'They add character' (medium close up)

• Riven is sat down on a chair infront of a mirror and the girls are surrounding her all holding props (a hairdryer, curlers, tweezers, power and sponge) a mid shot of them all is shown. (wide shot)

• Clancy is holding up two magazines from in front of riven face (wide shot)

• Mid shot of Clancy separating the magazine's to reveal Riven's face

• Zooms into a medium close up of Riven

• Illah says: 'You look so hot' (mid shot)

• Shot of Gray talking to Hugh (two shot)

• A medium close up of Gray looking to his right then looking at his friend then quickly turning back to look at Riven after her makeover

• Riven walks down the street with confidence in slow motion, then she falls (wide shot)

• He runs to help her up of his bending down and giving her his hand (two shot)

• A mid shot of Riven looking up at Gray and putting her hand out

• Close up shot of the two characters hands (holding)

• Two shot of them staring loving at each other

• Gray says: 'Are you ok?' (mid shot)

• Riven stutters: 'Ye I do that a lot' (mid shot)

• Gray says: Do you maybe want to go out sometime? (over the shoulder shot)

• Sound of Riven thoughts plays whilst she is still on the screen just staring at Gray, Riven's voice says, 'omg omg omg omg omg,' (medium close up)

• Riven says: 'Yes I would love to' (mid shot)

• Voice over: Where two polar opposites who only have clumsiness in common...'

• He is playing on his phone she is reading (wide shot)

• She then drops her book making him jump so he drops his phone (wide shot)

• Shot of gray eating a salad whilst she eats McDonalds (wide shot)

• Voice over: 'Fall in love'

• Riven and Gray are laughing Really hard at each other together (two shot)

• Gray snorts at the end of his laugh (medium close up)

• They both burst out laughing even more (two shot)

• Shot of them holding hands ( wide shot)

• They both fall backwards off a wall (wide shot)

• A medium close up of the soles of their shoes at the top of the wall

• Shot of them lying on the floor facing each other (wide shot)

• Goes into a two shot of them both smiling at each other

• Close up of Gray saying: 'I liked you with bushman eyebrows'

• Riven playfully hits him and says: 'I can't believe you just said that' (laughing) (two shot)

• They kiss on the grass lay down (two shot)

• Slide showing: 'From the directors of The way'

• Riven Dancing really badly in front of her friends (wide shot)

• Her and her friends singing into their hairbrushes' (wide shot)

• Hugh looks at a girls bum as she walks past as Gray moves his head back round (wide shot)

• Slide showing: 'And The Love Triangle'

• Gray:'You don't need to fit in Riv thats whats special about you' (two shot)

• But I don't fit in with anything I don't even fit in my good jeans anymore" (mid shot of Riven)

• Text saying, 'Harmount pictures presents'

• Gray and Riven walk into a glass wall holding hand thinking it was the entrance to a shop (wide shot)

• Shot of their faces whilst they are lay down looking forward (medium close up)

• Riven says: 'We really need to stop doing that' (Gray holds his head in pain and grunts) (close up)

• Voice over: 'Double take' whilst a slide is on saying, 'Double take'

• Riven and Gray kiss (two shot)

• Collage of many shots of Riven and Gray pulling stupid faces

• Credits